You really have a concept that fits with your disability, nice work!
However some detail issues I see: Given that your suction cups have the strength to keep it up: how are they attached to the container? Are they glued, snap fit., etc.? I think your poster should specify this.
Your blow moulded part seems a bit unrealistic to blow mould in that shape. This could maybe have been made a bit simpler.
If I understood your posters right your container goes back to it’s original shape after each use, that’s nice! Makes it easier to get out the last rest of soap. I think I would have worked some more with the semantics, it looks very much like a baloon now. I think there are other shapes that makes you want to squeese them as well.
I think it is a good concept but you can work on the practicality and the aesthetics a bit more, so that you can make a big difference between your product and the existing products. Also you can play a little bit more with the graphics so that it's easier to understand the use of the product.
I think your overall shape is very interesting, and the use of bright colours enhances it. But in your design, the suction cups are at the back, and it may be more prone to breakage if it is constantly pushed against.
The bottle reminds me of a bicep that feels like a helping hand to the user. I like the graphics on the bottle that makes it more realistic. The suction cups might have an issue of fall due to gravity and weight within the bottle.
But because I have seen your older shape I might prefer the old one a bit better. Even though it was block-y but transportation wise there are less space wasted.
the problem you have chosen to address is a very good choice, but i kind of feel that the suction cups at the back of the bottle might not be able to support the weight of the contents?
You really have a concept that fits with your disability, nice work!
ReplyDeleteHowever some detail issues I see:
Given that your suction cups have the strength to keep it up: how are they attached to the container? Are they glued, snap fit., etc.? I think your poster should specify this.
Your blow moulded part seems a bit unrealistic to blow mould in that shape. This could maybe have been made a bit simpler.
If I understood your posters right your container goes back to it’s original shape after each use, that’s nice! Makes it easier to get out the last rest of soap. I think I would have worked some more with the semantics, it looks very much like a baloon now. I think there are other shapes that makes you want to squeese them as well.
I think it is a good concept but you can work on the practicality and the aesthetics a bit more, so that you can make a big difference between your product and the existing products.
ReplyDeleteAlso you can play a little bit more with the graphics so that it's easier to understand the use of the product.
I think your overall shape is very interesting, and the use of bright colours enhances it. But in your design, the suction cups are at the back, and it may be more prone to breakage if it is constantly pushed against.
ReplyDeleteThe bottle reminds me of a bicep that feels like a helping hand to the user. I like the graphics on the bottle that makes it more realistic. The suction cups might have an issue of fall due to gravity and weight within the bottle.
ReplyDeleteBut because I have seen your older shape I might prefer the old one a bit better. Even though it was block-y but transportation wise there are less space wasted.
the problem you have chosen to address is a very good choice, but i kind of feel that the suction cups at the back of the bottle might not be able to support the weight of the contents?
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