Monday, 19 August 2013

Project 1: Accessible packaging week 4 Industry critique







 Feedback from Tom: Form is good but a bit blocky look into maybe giving it more of an organic shape by rounding the edges more. Also the nozzle and end of the bottle needs to be changed because it will leave a bit of wastage that i'm trying to avoid. No detail in suction cups and having the lid and nozzle one piece with a live hinge. Look into somehow having a detail in the back of the bottle for the suction cups.

Feedback from Eugenie: The shape is nice but the bottle makes me wanna put my palm on the front making me hit the nozzle. Posters aren't so clear on what its meant to be. Its good to see a consistent theme in the posters the  font should be clear not in twirly writing. Overall good concept just need to tweak shape a bit more.

Feedback from Qiuyuan: Doesn't indicate how it will be hung or that its even suppose to be stuck on a wall. The posters don't convey enough information. Not enough detail in the model to show how it will work. Shape needs to be changed.

Feedback from cormack: Need to look into if the suction cups will break or be damaged while pushing it against the wall. Look into maybe putting in a pump or some sort of button to dispense the liquid instead of pushing against the bottle to allow the shampoo liquid to come out. Be careful as some shampoo liquids are thicker then others so that it might not come out as effectively.

Refection: Alter shape to be more organic. Research plastics and look into changing the nozzle shape to point downwards minimizing wastage. Research suction cups and how it will be attached to the final product.

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